Monthly Archives: December 2023

Feedback Please (Good or Bad)

I’m not feeling the magic

So how do I begin

It will not turn out tragic

But I need a new spin

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I won’t take a break

Because I don’t need one

But I’d like to

get back to

having more fun

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Feedback would help

I have so many words

But for all intents and purposes

The stats show I’m not heard

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The glaring mistake

The subtle glitch

Takes away from perfection

Sets me back quite a bit

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It’s always something

Isn’t it?

How can we get ahead

If we can’t market it?

*

It would be fine for a hobby

To just do just for a laugh

But I at least need feedback

On all these rough drafts

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We Start to Have a Soul Here

Here

I am at once invisible

And on the greatest stage

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Calmly I walk across the wilderness

Tell me, what is all the rage?

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Busy roads and fast cars

Folks dressed up to the nines

Sidewalks crowded

Everyone a star

We form an intricate design

*

In space that is invisible

Until we write upon the page

**

Our name and the date

To start is great

As we fade

Into our own private journal

A glimpse over the shoulder

May make us bolder

if the viewer approves

And we like being told so

Or looking back

A follower that’s bright

Like a satellite at night

When it’s safe

And not too cold here

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Here

I am at once just physical

Walking on hallowed ground

*

Calmly I face spirits

Of all the years

Tell me, what is it that I have found?

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Busy ghosts and shooting stars

Folks blessed

By crossing lines

Someone shouted

“We have got this far”

Then shares

An unfinished design

*

In space that is just physical

Until the mind becomes unbound

**

Our name and a date

To start is great

As we fade

Into our own private novel

A glimpse over the shoulder

As we grow older

if the viewer approves

And we like being sold more

Or looking back

A follower with light

That’s starts to ignite the fight

When it’s safe

To turn to gold here

**

“What’s the big rush?”

You wonder

Asking me

“Oh not much”

As you can clearly see

I just want us to be free

From too much suffering

*

Sometimes we manage

But sometimes

we are hanging by a thread

Sometimes we are left for dead

Because we don’t fit the mould

Too much is in our head

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My heart has way more

Than most care to explore

I’ve often been told

I should focus

on the prize instead

Follow

both bold and subtle rules

Of insufferable fools

Who treat justice as uncool

Because it goes against

The junk that we’ve been fed

*

The world can change

With what we think

But then sometimes I start to sink

It seems like

they are often there to cut the thread

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Fortunately we tie good knots

And can get stronger chains

To avoid the pain

Lifting us up to better spots

Where gears don’t get caught

And no one is left struggling in vain

*

Pull ourselves up together

Where mind and body don’t sever

And our soul is soothed

or positively excited by our brain

*

People see a mountain or a hill

Trees that are never quite still

The forest is a wall or a window

We write our visions in the rain

*

Life strives best

when we all gain in goals that are logical

healthy and sane

**

Here

I am at once invincible

With logic that can’t fail

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Calmly I board the train at the station

Tell me

How do we shape the rails?

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Busy routes with fast starts

Folks best to be on time

Strangers doubted

We can’t know that far

We seek a familiar design

*

In space that is invincible

Until we share the right details

**

Our name and date

To start is great

As we fade

Into our own private story

A glimpse over the shoulder

Our vision is told here

if the viewer approves

And we can be in the fold more

Or looking back

A follower in sight

With an appetite for heights

When it’s safe

To take a hold here

We start to have a soul here

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As it Should Be

Gratitude

For everything

*

Turn a blind eye

to that which can’t be

*

That which shouldn’t be

Will fall away

*

May all that we need

stay close to us

*

Close to us

is a vast measurement

as we reach across

the whole universe

*

We are here

But reach there

In the blink of an eye

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Connect

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Connection to the other side

Of the world

The wall

The window

*

Connecting to another guide

From the world

A cold wind

The warm glow

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We all need the sun

Breath of life

We need the world

Need what’s inside most

We should be free to seek fun

Seriously

But first free the world

From scenes

that are unkind though

**

That which shouldn’t be

Will fall away

*

May all that we do need

stay here with us

*

Here with us

is a bold statement

as we look across

the whole universe

*

We are here

But reach there

Within our mind’s eye

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Connect

The vision

Of everything

*

Turn all of our eyes

To life as it should be

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Create

More peace and harmony

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The Inertia

There is no stopping speed

Unless you change the inertia

Hitting a wall

Might just be perfect

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Looking up for each day

Is much more worth it

Hold onto the nail

As we hit hard to secure it

*

Ten nails on my hands

I try pushing through crowds

I stick to the same speed

We stick to the ground

**

One word is heard before all

Hello

would you like to fall?

Then slow down

Or get set

Must take a stand

It can’t get out of hand

Inside the machine

We buckle up

Get going, keep clean

And do our thing

Think, discuss

Work, sleep and eat

While time speeds by

Carry on inside

We feel what we feel

And believe what we believe

**

There is no starting speed

Unless you change the inertia

With what we haul

A push might be perfect

*

Looking up for each day

is always worth it

We can’t ever fail

If we know how to work it

*

Ten fails I can’t stand

I try pushing through crowds

I pick up to speed

And get picked up off the ground

**

Try to alleviate more of the pressure around us

Just get up

And get set

Must take a stand

It can’t get out of hand

Inside the machine

We suck it up

Get going, done deed

And do our thing

Think progress

Work on everything

While time speeds by

Carry on inside

We feel what we feel

And believe what we believe

***

Gravity and the Weather

Surprising change of pace

We are caught up in the race

As we begin

Trying to win

Better just lay it down

And it will all come together

*

Arriving kind of late

There’s no way to avoid fate

I knew it was my thing

But I couldn’t bring it

I was being held down

By gravity and the weather

**

Dividing up our days

And every hour we face

The life we’re in

Always depends

On how we can stay up

A moment can last forever 

**

Make it count

But go with the flow

Peace we have found

Helps out all we know

*

Be the difference

If it’s all the same

If no one listens

It’s just a shame

*

But it’s still best

to play the game

Share our passion

And take the blame

**

Surprised look on your face

It’s best if we can keep pace

As we begin

Trying to win

Better just lay it down

And it will all come together

**

When we drive to be great

We should never hesitate

If it is not my thing

Find new moves

and bring them

If I’m being held down

That’s just gravity

And the weather

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Work to be Strong

Years of fears

Sometimes

I have felt a hollow future

Other times it fills up

And becomes so strong

*

The sound is very clear

I hear the winning cheers

People far and people near

Following the slope of life

A knowing drive

A hopeful viewpoint

We all need someone

Or

Something that we can work for

**

I need you here

This time

To prevent a hollow future

This time will fill up

To become so strong

*

I have filled my days

And made it okay

No matter what they say

Faith will never be gone

I will make it each day

My optimism will stay

We will all find our way

Hope for life can’t be wrong

**

Years are mirrors

Sometimes

I have seen a hollow future

Other times it fills up

And becomes so strong

*

Years have jeers

Sometimes

They cause a hollow future

Other times we fill up

And become so strong

**

The sound is very clear

I hear the spinning gears

People far and people near

Each hold their shred of life

A better drive

A different viewpoint

We all need someone

Or

Something for us to work for

**

I need you here

All the time

To prevent a hollow future

This time will fill up

To become so strong

*

We fill up all our days

We can make it okay

No matter what they say

Trust will never be gone

I will make it some day

My optimism will stay

We all find our way

Coping is never wrong

*

We will know more about life 

By tomorrow at dawn

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Bullies

Bullies

Think that they are right

And fight the fight

They don’t care 

when they hurt others

Well… actually

they do tend to like that

Get off on it

Because it boosts their ego

“Great,” with sarcasm I say

“Let’s be malicious!”

Nothing says good humanity

Like being vicious

🙄

**

Going against

Everything we are taught

by the good books

But then

They still say that the one

Good book

Should be revered

While they go against it

In every way

To me that’s 100% weird

Bizarre and totally absurd

Still they claim that

they are the smartest

because

That’s their ego

**

Bullies criticize others

With blind hypocrisy

*

They are vicious like animals

Then praise

their own humanity

Everything they gather

Steal, deprive

Is a nice trophy

(While they are alive)

But when they’re gone

Nothing lives on

And the world takes a nose dive

How greedy

How selfish can they be?

**

What if the afterlife does arrive?

And kindness thrives

I doubt that

their ego will be revived

*

Bullies

Often do control situations

Even communication

That we

would like to engage in

*

As we speak

They dig their nails in

To prevent good

from coming through

Because our ideas go against

what they stand for

(their contrived world view)

*

Fact is

they wouldn’t stand that way

if they actually knew

What would help

the situation most

And better things

that they could do

**

If it’s all about ego

Are bullies cool?

Because

they have power over others

And use good people like tools?

*

No, that’s not cool

*

That’s

the destruction of humanity

Which in the end

Will make us all look like fools

When bullies hurt everyone

With harmful

Self-imploding rules

The victims may fall first

But the bullies will suffer

Unsupported alone

In their own

self-designed

Egocentric cesspools

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Always a New Day

It’s a new day

I’m taking it on

The old ways

Should be gone now

Except for the learning

And best healing ways

Whatever helps us all get along

Most surely should stay

**

It’s always a new day

Let’s take them all on

The old ways

Should just be gone now,

The ones that discriminate

Based on bad assumptions

And views that don’t include

Each one of us

*

Why can’t we trust

Each day that arrives?

Why can’t we just

Get on with our lives?

**

It’s hard days

When we can’t get ahead

Because someone else

Has been misled

*

Rumours of differences

Have gone to their head

The past should melt

We must cut harmful threads

**

It’s a new day

It’s nearly dawn

The past ways

We should get on now

Consider new learning

Find the best healing ways

Whatever helps us all get along

Most surely should stay

**

It’s always a new day

Let’s take them all on

The past ways

Have already shone now,

The ones that discriminate

Based on dim assumptions

And views that don’t include

Each one of us

*

We should discuss

Each day that arrives

Why can’t we just

Improve more of our lives?

**

It’s hard days

When we can’t get ahead

Because someone else

Is full of dread

*

Misunderstood differences

Have gone to their head

The past should melt

We must cut harmful threads

*

And sew together

The seeds for a new way

The materials that covers

Everyone

All the way

No true love is dead

It’s always a new day

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Just as Tough as Nails

In this mood

It might seem rude

To assume

that it’s

so positive that it’s vain

If lashing out

There is no doubt

Avoid any prolonged pain

With the cold fall rain

I have to say

It feels okay

Enough to make a difference

In our perspective

Today for positive gain

*

I can’t complain

I hope it turns out great

**

In this mood

That might improve

As if on cue

It is

so intricate it may seem vain

I’m just branching out

There is no doubt

Avoid any ounce of pain

With the cold Fall rain

I have to say

It seems impossible

But we can still make a difference

In this perspective

Today

For internal gain

*

It may seem plain

Bur we can make it great

**

Everybody knows

Despite what shows

Below the pose

We are as tough as nails

*

On the wire

And flying higher

Within the fire

We have lived the tale

We will never fail

No matter what they say

Somehow it can be okay

And we will prevail

*

With our hard-earned pay

Never off the rails

Open our mind like sails

Only the wind will still trail

**

Big or small

The hammer falls

We know what that entails

Hard-headed

With direction

A strong spirit

keeps us here

Sometimes there is a test

And we are

Just as tough as nails

**

In this mood

Good attitude 

Can be viewed

It is

so essential

Not seen as vain

Just watching out

There is no doubt

Avoid any unfair pain

With the cold Fall rain

I have to say

With each sun ray

We can always make a Difference

In our perspective

Today for bottom-line gain

*

There will be change

It has to turn out great

**

Floor to the roof

Or hit the wall

We will not move

The hammer falls

We know it never fails

Hard headed

With direction

A strong spirit

keeps us here

We don’t want anything less

So we stay

Just as tough as nails

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Never Ignore

I have got an idea

It is becoming clear now

In order to follow through

I have to consume all the fear

Eat it right up

So it no longer gets in the way

Like flip things upside down

So they don’t seems so grey

After they drag me through the mud

And I put in

All my blood, sweat and tears

I will have no fears

And I can get on with my idea

**

If I can just get some momentum now

I can

Move on with the morning

Somehow have a good impact

Feel well myself

Aim to help everyone else

As the day is warming

Make a difference

while we can

Create a better plan

And stop focusing on

What is and isn’t normal

Healing solutions

Are more important

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The night can be cold

We have to be bold now

Visions in the stars

Immeasurably far

Each one burning bright

And like snowflakes incessantly swarming

Act now

Prepare

Better ways to see

And better ways to be

Prevent

Negative impact that

Happens next if it’s stormy

Find strong form

For the days ahead

And we should never ignore real chances

to make a Positive difference in life

*

That is so important

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