I’m not feeling the magic

So how do I begin

It will not turn out tragic

But I need a new spin

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I won’t take a break

Because I don’t need one

But I’d like to

get back to

having more fun

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Feedback would help

I have so many words

But for all intents and purposes

The stats show I’m not heard

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The glaring mistake

The subtle glitch

Takes away from perfection

Sets me back quite a bit

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It’s always something

Isn’t it?

How can we get ahead

If we can’t market it?

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It would be fine for a hobby

To just do just for a laugh

But I at least need feedback

On all these rough drafts

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